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Axill (2003-04-14 13:48) [0]

Хочу сделать сайт со своими бесплатными программами. Я перевел предложения _Сам_, проверьте правильные ли предложения. Заранее всем всем спасибо! Тексты:
Welcome!
In this page you can download programs and games written by XZ Software programmers.
Thanks!
Special thanks for our hosting – Portland Communications Ltd. http://www.portland.co.uk/

R15 is small, but very interesting logic game. The playing field of game is divided into 16 parts (4x4) and contains 15 chips putted in casual order. For win you must dispose all chips by increasing the chips numbers.

Rsnake is one of variations on a well-known snake game. The target of game consists in collecting all bananas from minefield. Apart from bananas and mines in game exist web-bombs which slow down a snakes speed for a time.

Desktop Blocker is powerful utility for blocking the desktop from yours friends or children. The blocking operation is imperceptible for all. Additionally you can protect your desktop with password. The program is easily for using.

RMCleaner is useful utility for cleaning drives from temporary files. Some applications create temporary files without deleting them after work is done. So RMCleaner helps you to remove them (files). It supports more than 36 temporary file masks, which users can add or edit. RM Cleaner can find and delete files from one or more drives at once. It creates reports you can save as Text or as HTML file.

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Дмитрий К.К. (2003-04-14 13:58) [1]

Мдя... ошибок даже не море, а океан. Ты знаешь такое понятие, как артикли?

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Axill (2003-04-14 14:23) [2]

>Дмитрий К.К.
Знаю, но проблемно. Плиз не пинайте, а помогите исправить.

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Axis_of_Evil (2003-04-14 16:06) [3]

In this page you can download programs and games written by XZ Software programmers.
Thanks!
Special thanks for our hosting – Portland Communications Ltd. http://www.portland.co.uk/

R15 is small, but very interesting logic game. The playing field of game is divided into 16 parts (4x4) and contains 15 chips putted in casual order. For <to> win you must dispose all chips by increasing the chips < their>numbers.

Rsnake (?) is one of variations on a well-known snake game. The target <aim или main idea или plot>of game consists in collecting <is to collect>all bananas from min efield. Apart from bananas and mines in game exist web-bombs which slow down a snake<">s speed for a time<short period of time>.

Desktop Blocker is powerful <ага, сильнее некуда :)> utility for blocking the desktop from yours friends or children. The blocking operation is imperceptible for all. Additionally you can protect your desktop with password. The program is easily <easy>for using.

RMCleaner is useful utility for cleaning drives from temporary files. Some applications create temporary files without deleting them after <the>work is done. So <Also> RMCleaner helps you to remove them (files) <повтор = 1 предложение абзаца>. It supports more than 36 temporary file masks, which users can add or edit. RM Cleaner can find and delete files from one or more drives at once. It creates reports you can save as Text or as HTML file.

v1.1
продолжение следует (получше почитаю)

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Axis_of_Evil (2003-04-14 16:08) [4]

Инструкция:
++ заменяется на <**>

<**> - комментарий или текст, который имеет смысл вставить

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Axis_of_Evil (2003-04-14 16:09) [5]

Тааак инструкция не получилась ...
Жирный текст заменяется следующим за ним текстом в < >

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Anatoly Podgoretsky (2003-04-14 16:26) [6]

Ты слышал про таких людей как переводчики, им отдай свой текст они его выправят.

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Mike Kouzmine (2003-04-14 17:25) [7]

utility for blocking the desktop from yours friends or children
А если это враги? Да еще взрослые.

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Suntechnic (2003-04-14 19:58) [8]

Как один из вариантов:

Programs and games written by XZ Software can be downloaded from this page.
Thanks!
Special thanks for our hosting – Portland Communications Ltd. http://www.portland.co.uk/

R15 is a small, but very interesting logic game. The game field is divided into 16 parts (4x4) and contains 15 chips (in random order). The game is over when you dispose all chips by increasing the number of chips (Я правда одно не понял: Это как?).

Rsnake is one of variations on a well-known snake game. The target of the game is to collect all bananas from minefield. Along (всё-таки web-bombs вместе с бананами и с минами учавствуют в игре, а не отдельно) with bananas and mines there are web-bombs in the game that slow the snake down for a while.

Desktop Blocker is a powerful tool for blocking the desktop from your friends or children. The blocking is imperceptible to you operation. You can additionally protect your desktop with a password. It is an easy-to-use program.

RMCleaner is a useful tool for cleaning drives from temporary files. Some applications create temporary files without deleting them after work is done. (RMCleaner helps you to remove them (files)- дык он помагает или удаляет?). RMCleaner gets that job done! (если он конечно удаляет, а не только помагает) It supports more than 36 temporary file masks that users can add or edit. RM Cleaner can find and delete files from one or more drives at once. It creates reports in Txt or HTML formats.

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Плохой человек (2003-04-14 21:03) [9]

Моя лепта:

From this page you can download programs and games written by XZ Software programmers.
Thanks! <- ИМХО тут не рулит
Special thanks for our hosting to Portland Communications Ltd. http://www.portland.co.uk/

R15 is a small, but very interesting logic al game. The playing field of the game is divided into 16 parts (4x4) and contains 15 chips, put in casual order. To win you must dispose all chips by increasing their number <- тавтологий не надо.

Rsnake is one of variations on a well-known snake game. The target of the game consists of collecting all bananas from minefield. Apart from bananas and mines in game there {это необходмо!} exist web-bombs which slow down the snake "s speed for a time. <- Змейка то одна конкретная и за орфографией надо следить

Desktop Blocker is a powerful utility for blocking the desktop from your {эта форма уже выражает принадлежность} friends or children. The blocking operation is imperceptible for all. Additionally you can protect your desktop with password. The program is easy {программа легка - краткое прилагательное, а не наречие} for using.

RMCleaner is useful utility for cleaning drives from temporary files. Some applications create temporary files without deleting them after work is done. So RMCleaner helps you to remove them {без скобок, такого не любят. можно просто написать those files вместо them}. It supports more than 36 temporary file masks, which users can add or edit. RMCleaner can find and delete files from one or several {наверное, так лучше по смыслу, ведь дисков то несколько, а не завались} drives at once. It creates reports that you can save as a Text or HTML file. <-- Text File и HTML File, видно имелось ввиду, поэтому юзаем File один раз, но без as после or.

Ну, текст хорошо бы сгладить, но забей....

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Burmistroff (2003-04-15 01:58) [10]

... а я бы вообще написал - On this page ;)

15 chips, put in casual order
arranged in casual

The target of the
может the aim of the game is to (consists лишнее)

from minefield.
on the minefield

with password
with a password?

easy for using.
easy for use?

without deleting them after work is done
after they finish their work?

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